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PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2016 8:32 am 
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Loved it!

Dr White, I had a similar reaction to the ending. I think Peter is to blame here, not the poor slavegirl. I'm so mad at the stupid stupid boy.

The ending is infuriating, but I guess the purpose was to get such a strong emotional response from the reader.So my hat's off to the master storyteller once again. Damn you and jolly good work! :D

I can't believe how this story has a very good structure in itself, but also manages to became a great ending to the saga. The way it closes so many parentheses is really beautiful.

So many questions answered, so many new questions appear. So exciting! On page 50, Maggie sums it up it perfectly: "it fills me with satisfaction and cravings at the same time".

I have so many points to make but I don't want to rain spoilers on you guys. I have read it twice already but I still find new things on the background and in the dialogue. This is not simple porn! This is a mindfuck for me. This is so rewarding.

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 10, 2016 11:54 am 
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Perfect comic!


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 3:43 am 
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Definitely worth the long wait!! :D :D

LOVED this. Others have said a lot of what I was going to say and I totally agree with Ernest Greene and Samantha. Loads of little things I loved and the art just keeps getting better and better. There were so many of the "realistic" style frames, looking amazing. Full pages at the beginning! Really incredible stuff. I have to say, without spoiling anything, I loved the way it ended and that striking final image!!! :shock: :shock:


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 5:19 am 
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Oh my God, surely the best comic of the series for his complexity, character development, story twists, mad attention to details and sought fetishes...

I think I much feel like Samantha, reading this comic is pure mindfucking for me.

I think this is the first time that probably everybody felt sorry for what happened to a Dofantasy character... I don't know if I will be able to sleep tonight... :cry:
Despite I would have really liked to see Mags accomplish her love dream, and Peter enjoy the voluptious dedication of the best sex slave on this planet for the years to come, I think that sadly that's the best way the series had to end.
All the best things come to an end eventually, and if this is supposed to be Cumbunny end for real (or is it?), well at least we will always remember her at her best.
Not to mention Sherry knocking out a superior with that timber, it's definitively not looking good for her...
Is it really possible that the 2 E's favourites are gonna be the two gals to leave Stevenson harem? Didn't he say once that he could never do away with them?


Damn is gonna be such a long wait to see how the outcome of this finale is gonna be like...

Anyway, good job E!


P.S.: MAGGIEE NNOOOOOOOO!!! DON'T LEAVE US LITTLE BABE!!! IT'S GONNA BE ALRIGHT!!!
Sorry for the rant... I needed it.


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 11:09 am 
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Wait wait wait Im downloading right now. :shock: :shock:


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 12:09 pm 
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Goddamnit E, you just made me cry for a cartoon character. All things considered, Miss Cumbunny led a good life for where she ended up, but bad things happen to good people.


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 2:29 pm 
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Goodness me, E. Rare is the day that I comment on these forums but I felt I ought to in response to this latest instalment.

I agree with everything that was said by ernest - the ending really put me through the wringer emotionally, and while I might not have liked it in the moment, that is nonetheless a sign of tremendous writing.

I'm very, very strongly hoping that Maggie is okay. Going by what E said on the release page for the comic - "The ending is not a traditional one. I designed it to have some kind of ambiguity. Some of you might get angry, some might have panic attacks. I expect riots on the streets. There is no need for panic, all will be fine." - I'm fairly sure our little Maggie isn't dead. She may, however, face one hell of a road back to full health, depending on where E wants to take the story.

I'd like to humbly petition the author: E, if you read this - your cliffhangers are just deliciously evil, in the very best sense. I can absolutely understand why you put them in there - much as my in-the-moment response might be to hate them!

That said - may I ask, is there a possibility that the next comic you publish will contain the resolution of this particular cliffhanger? And if that isn't the current plan, is it possible that you might switch things around to do that? I don't think I can survive waiting a year or more to find out if Maggie's alright.

As for this comic in general - a stunning work, and thanks so much for putting in all this work to bring it to us! :)


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 11, 2016 7:12 pm 
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Excellent comic E. Can't say I liked the ending but as a whole the story was great. The story was what a story should be it kept me on the edge of my seat and yelling at the page, not literally, hoping the hero would come to his senses.

This comic had storylines I was hoping to see. Like how Sherry treated Carol would affect Maggie and Sherry relationship and other storylines.

The ending really should have a profound affect on the characters.

Perhaps a minor spoiler or two

How does this change Peter if at all?

What does this do to Maggie?

How is this going to affect Sherry and Peter's relationship?

And we can't forget about Carol

I don't know how you are going to be to top this E but is was great ending to a great series. Though I'm not sure it was happy enough. :D

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2016 12:14 am 
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hell yeah!

I will probably write a thousand word review for this soon. it is a masterpiece.


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2016 3:17 am 
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here it is:




First of all!

This is one perv's opninon but Graduation is the BEST episode of the BG series, and maybe the best of all E comics.

There is so much going on. Any other artist could tell all this story in 3-4 comics. E gives us all that in one extended comic.


We all know that all E characters are fully developed. E also develops individual relationships between characters. Count how many meaningful encounters there are: Peter with Maggie, Mel with Gwen, Tawnie with Molly, Molly with Paul, Paul with Peter, Sherry with Maggie, Sherry and Mel, Sherry and Carol, Peter with Jack, Peter with Quinn, Vice P with Peter, Peter with Jeff, and so on and so forth all reveal something important about the story. There is no meaningless pointless dialogue in this thing. So well done. I'm proud of E for this accomplishment and I feel a little proud of myself for being able to get most of the tricks he/she uses in the story.


How many subplots are in there? It is amazing how none of that slows the main story down.


REFERENCES TO THE SAGA


Most of you must have gotten this: Maggie' dream sequence in the beginning is shot-by shot repruduction of Peter's dream in BG1. Marvelously reversed. It is Maggie who is cursing the bell for ringing too early. the art is fantastic! I felt I got my money's worth with those two pages alone.

When Jack enters the boys room and sees Peter with his two slaves. Brilliant callback to the original comic, seamlessly integrated.

Lucy being used as a toilet slave? They always mentioned it, but now we see it.

Gwen thinking "Am I Cathy now?" as she licked Peter's ass.

Maggie and Heather chatting ion page 42. Not sure of this one but it feels like a callback to Repurposed.


Of course the biggest and most important callback to the original story is the part where Peter returns home and his father gives him the gift. That is a perfect inside joke and a brilliant way to summarize the story arcs of all these characters. Full circle.



ATTENTION TO DETAIL

You wonder where Peter's Frankie Stein poster is? check out page 32.

I mean what other artist does that?



Wardrobe continuity! Our favorite shirts. In the beginning Gwen is restrained by the same harness Sherry was restrained in BG3.


Posters on the background!


MELANIE!

is my favorite character in the whole EC universe. I'd marry her and have tens of kids with her.


OTHER COOL STUFF

Bunnyhops theme song?

Molly's ultimate humiliation.

evidence that Sherry's evil plan is working.

Peter's partner revealed as Mr. Moore.

Cindy and the twins at the park

Maggie's speech.

interconnected scenes at the and, the gangbang vs the reverse gangbang. It is not only perfect porn scenes, but also emotionally powerful and suspenseful.

Jeff's mother with cum on her chin.

Hannah Cox emoji




MISSING PARTS

I really wanted to see Gwen at the grad party.

I also wanted to see Nathalie's online auction, but I guess we may see that later anyway.





THE ENDING

The ending is magnificent! It can work two ways.

If you think Maggie is dead after all this, it is a heartbreaking ending. It would be a perfect ending anyway. Birthday Gift saga is Maggie's saga. It started with her, and it ends with her.

But.

I don't believe Maggie is dead for a several reasons.
1) Maggie can't be dead because then the scene becomes a Sn**f scene. it is not allowed in Dofantasy, right?
2) There is a Maggie comic in Erenisch's project list: "Maggie's Dream". This makes me think that she will survive, maybe in a coma as someone else suggested before.
3)We don't see Maggie dying. we see only Sherry's reaction. She is worried but she doesn't say she is dead!
4) Erenisch promised us a happy ending for Maggie and Sherry. Maggie's death is not a happy ending.


So,

I see the ending as a happy one. It is the typical "hero saving the damsel in distress" ending. Here prince charming was a little too late for the rescue, but because this is a porn comic, it had to be that way. She is tired and fainty. If you read the ending that way, it is still a very good ending.

I have to admit, dead Maggie ending is the better one for the comic and the saga, but I prefer the sleepy Maggie ending for obvious reasons.


It is brilliant actually, E gives us two great endings in one, and we can't know which one is real until the word of god confirms one.


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2016 7:22 am 
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ahhh great job! Stinks we are gonna have to wait so long to find out what happens tho hahah.


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2016 7:35 am 
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One thing that wasn't addressed in this comic that we'll surely see some follow-on from in later titles is the ending of The Office. Sherry's mother and sister, now property of the Stevenson household, make no appearance and Sherry doesn't mention them or her father's death. Do we presume Paul is keeping her in the dark on that? Or are we far enough ahead in the timeline that Sherry's got over it to some degree?

Out-of-universe, of course, I'm sure the reason is that E couldn't find room for them in this incredibly-packed comic XD


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2016 8:13 am 
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am I the only one who didn't understand the Sophie Catin reference in the beginning of the comic?

of all the callbacks of previous E-works, that was the only one in which I had no idea who she is

I don't ever remember an issue where Peter interacted with a Sophie Catin

we all know Frankie Stein is a popular movie character in the e-verse so was Sophie as well?


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2016 8:36 am 
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fishstick wrote:
am I the only one who didn't understand the Sophie Catin reference in the beginning of the comic?

of all the callbacks of previous E-works, that was the only one in which I had no idea who she is

I don't ever remember an issue where Peter interacted with a Sophie Catin

we all know Frankie Stein is a popular movie character in the e-verse so was Sophie as well?


She appears in the party scene at the end of The Society. She's supposedly a world-famous actress who was kidnapped and enslaved.


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2016 9:57 am 
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Bangerman's idea makes sense about the ending. I hope he is right.


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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2016 10:16 am 
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A very minor spoiler that has nothing to do with the plot so I won't highlight it.

Gwen's character development. When Peter tells her that in a survey she was the most popular girl the boys wanted to bang.

Gwen thinks even more than Maggie.

Which means to me Gwen is beginning to think of herself below Maggie which is a Change from Bg 8 and 9. Maybe we our starting to see a less prideful Gwen.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 12, 2016 4:55 pm 
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This was REALLY good. Bravo, E.

On a semi-related note: I really miss the wiki. No complaints. I just appreciate being able to see the whole world and peruse it.

GREAT comic. It makes me wanna review the whole series all over again, and I hope that this milestone comic inspires an influx of new fans. Bravo bravo bravo!


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PostPosted: Wed Apr 13, 2016 1:30 pm 
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Thanks a lot for all the thoughtful reviews and kind words. I will not comment on the comic s soon. Let's give it a couple more weeks before the official spoilers. :)


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PostPosted: Thu Apr 14, 2016 1:31 am 
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This is one of your best works Erneisch. Congratulations and please let her live!!!


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Perhaps a future visit to the clinic


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